Rain
by Sarah
It had never rained this hard before. Not here. Water was pooling around our bodies, mixing with our blood and all the while I couldnt help but think, how could it have gotten so bad?
My body trembled constantly and I realized quickly that there was no escaping the pain. No one was here to save us.
I shut my eyes and buried my face in his chest, listening for his heartbeat. It was so light compared to my own. Im sorry I whispered into the cold night air, my hands shaking as I wrapped them around his waist trying to bring him closer as if that would save us. I cant... I couldnt
He was so cold.
No
not
he rasped as if he was fighting for breath, his arms gripping mine almost painfully. Then all of a sudden his body was jerking violently against mine and he was seizing and there was nothing I could do.
I clung to him, desperately holding onto him even when his thrashing became so bad that it was hurting me. I tried so hard to calm him but I dont think he could hear anything but my sobbing. He was dying and I knew it.













Comments
It could be a prologue, but as a short story in itself, it's not very effective. We just don't have a reason to pity the couple, because we don't understand what's going on.
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"Take a flying fuck at a rolling doughnut. Take a flying fuck at the moon."
Thank you for your insight though ^^
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Watch me crumble,
Watch me die,
Watch me drown before your eyes: [link]
If it was only a dream: [link]
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"Take a flying fuck at a rolling doughnut. Take a flying fuck at the moon."
I'm thinking of maybe making a series of drabbles for this, we'll see what happens.
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Watch me crumble,
Watch me die,
Watch me drown before your eyes: [link]
If it was only a dream: [link]
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Watch me crumble,
Watch me die,
Watch me drown before your eyes: [link]
If it was only a dream: [link]
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This voice does not reach you
Opening your eyes, your face shows lies, and laughter
Words which you could not say
Now the place where you once sang
Everyone compared to you is loved
I have loved I have loved .
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